Nothing short of Horrible
I Gave this movie a 3, and i'll tell you why. The pause inbetween everything is way to long, This is what makes your viewers lose interest. You should work on that, also the graphics weren't that great. It's not very detailed or anything like that just shaded partly. The song was very boring, which also would cause viewers to lose interest very quickly. Work on these three elements:
Your sound
Your graphics
And the pause inbetween things.
Fix that and we'll have some good newgrounds material.
Have a nice day
-Wagger